Tattoes and Body Jewellery

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Body Piercing Today, people have tattoos and piercings to look younger and fashion. However, many medical tests reveal that this practice can provide a variety of serious diseases to human health. People who have asked more inexpensive way to get piercings who suffer the most. If drilling is not conducted under the direction of experienced specialists, who could easily have caused an inflammation of the skin. Therefore, in terms of health problems, which must move away from this practice.

wow. What is it? here goes anyway ……………….. ** Today, people have tattoos and piercings to look younger and fashion .** Today Tattoos and peircing / or body (s) LOOK (far) younger and fashionable. ** However, many medical tests reveal that this practice can provide a variety of serious diseases to human health .** However, many medical researchers show that the practice (S) Or practice variey can make a serious disease (S) beneficiaries. Use [human beings if necessary ]. ** People who searched cheapest way to get body piercing as a <Changing Suffering .** * Those *> seeking the cheapest form of body piercing are more at risk. ** If the drilling is not done under the supervision of experienced specialists, which could easily cause skin inflammation .** If the piercing is not under the [Supervision of experts or people with experience in this] area could [Easily] cause or the cause of many problems such as skin inflammation and infections. ** For Accordingly, in terms of health problems, must depart from this practice .** So [Or: practice]. ♥

Has anyone read WALDEN by THOREAU?

I am having trouble analyzing the different elements of style in these passages. i am suppose to tie the authors purpose with stylistic elements :

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http://www.online-literature.com/thoreau/walden/

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