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my poem "lillyrow?

lillyrow white hands, find the edge, yellow nails, everything is scratched, black eyes, it shows Red locking teeth which the liquid flows from you, pure white power is in you, white hands, Lift, pink tongue, poisons his body, red eyes Pierce, not kept secret, stolen from his consciousness, the mysterious power, waves his fragile form, Invincible, which kills slowly, until the last beat, Wheezing is not necessary, death and power, I walk on earth.

I would change "the nails yellow / is scraped into a" Nails' Yellow / Scratch All "and delete the verse" No secret is kept and flight of consciousness "The reason is that his other verses (except of the last two) can read the first and second lines together. Maybe change "is pure power / Into You" for "raw power / beach where "The way this reading, he is a vampire? "Lack of air is not necessary / Dead measure / You walk the earth" "Land" should be "Earth" does not think you need the "invincibility" stanza. Maybe change the last line "Now walk the Earth "Very well done. Great images and emotions. Thanks for sharing:)

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